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    dots Submission Name: Jimminy Cricket (EXPLICIT) dots
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    Author: TeslaKoyal
    Elite Ratio:    1.79 - 19/67/85
    Words: 173
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsJimminy Cricket (EXPLICIT) dots
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    Jimminy Cricket raped a mouse
    For making his poor wife cry
    And when Jimminy was done
    He gouged out both of his eyes
    Jimminy took those eyes home
    To feed his poor old wife
    Only to find she had cheated on him
    So he ended her fucking life
    Jimminy went to an old black tree
    To think about his bad deeds
    He started to cry and pulled out a pipe
    And smoked 10 pounds of weed
    When he was higher than the clouds
    Jimminy started to laugh
    He took a branch from the black tree
    And shoved it up his cricket ass
    Jimminy climbed the tree to the top
    He looked down to the ground
    Then Jimminy Cricket jumped
    Leaving his dead body to be found
    When his mom saw him dead
    She fell to the ground and cried
    Then she got up, smiled big and said
    "I'm so happy that bastard died!"




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      Sick! Kept me going to the end. Well written. I'm smiling.
    | Posted on 2013-12-08 00:00:00 | by my shadow | [ Reply to This ]
      Lol that's hilarious!
    | Posted on 2013-12-03 00:00:00 | by Teofila | [ Reply to This ]


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