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    dots Submission Name: to love youdots
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    Author: jeniecel
    ASL Info:    28/f/philippines
    Elite Ratio:    3.22 - 313/373/169
    Words: 68
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsto love youdots
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    I plunged into an infinite space
    where too many words intensified
    a feeling


    too many words sound restraint
    when spoken
    I dare not say

    but if I were to love you
    in the utterance of a deeply-felt
    deprivation curved in my tongue

    if I were to say
    a drift of the heart
    back and forth and limitless


    I am speechless





    Submitted on 2013-12-03 01:59:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      the sound of something
    is its helpless essence

    and we are mere whispers
    beneath what we've believed

    summery soft touches
    thoughtful bright brushstrokes

    before there were words
    there were still words to dream...
    | Posted on 2013-12-07 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]
      I read your poetry
    and
    I cry out
    love is

    a red mist

    A kiss becomes

    breath

    We
    breathe
    unity
    | Posted on 2013-12-04 00:00:00 | by DaleP | [ Reply to This ]


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