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    dots Submission Name: Not Even A Smiledots
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    Author: TeslaKoyal
    Elite Ratio:    1.81 - 19/66/84
    Words: 305
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsNot Even A Smiledots
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    People being people
    They'll do what they please
    When they aren't the ones
    Begging on their knees
    Can you please spare a dime
    A voice asks as you ignore
    But it's not you all alone
    Curled up on the dirty floor
    Why do you turn your head
    To the people in need
    Act like you don't have enough
    You live with that greed
    Thinking they'll be fine
    Someone else will likely help
    But did you ever stop to think
    There might not be anyone else
    Who will stop to say hi
    Take 5 seconds of your time
    And reach into your pocket
    To give up just a dime
    No, some people won't stop
    They won't even smile
    Just keep walking forward
    And hide in their silent denial
    That someone else will help
    But how could you ever know
    If anyone else will stop
    To smile and say hello
    Even if it seems we're short
    On things we need to live
    We should offer anyway
    Because God wants us to give
    Of ourselves for one another
    It's what He asks of us
    To love our brothers and sisters
    In Christ who loves all of us
    And even if you can't give
    An object needed to survive
    Money isn't the only thing
    To keep us all alive
    It's your love you can share
    It just might help them find
    That it's ok to reach out
    And know some people are kind
    So next time you hear a voice
    Asking for one small thing
    Please don't ignore them
    You could change everything




    Submitted on 2013-12-03 18:15:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Get a job you doggone slob is so much easier than how did you get here or can I help.

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2013-12-03 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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