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    dots Submission Name: God Pleasedots
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    Author: TeslaKoyal
    Elite Ratio:    1.81 - 19/66/84
    Words: 362
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsGod Pleasedots
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    I wear my heart on my sleeve
    There is no hate in me
    Why do I feel insane
    From this emotional pain
    I cry to God for help
    Don't want to hurt myself
    Oh no, not ever again
    I'm fighting until the end
    How can I be alright
    When I am scared at night
    The fear, it haunts my mind
    Memories play and rewind
    All the darkness of my past
    How long will this last
    So I drop to my knees
    And I beg, God please
    Save me from myself
    Oh God, I need your help
    Take away this sin, this need
    To cut myself and bleed
    With you I find relief
    In you I strongly believe
    You help me with anything
    You are my everything
    God take my hand tonight
    And shine me in your light
    My chains are off, I'm free
    But something is pulling me
    Dragging me into a hole
    Where I lose all control
    I can't find my way out
    And that's when I shout
    Jesus my Lord, my Savior
    Free me from this behavior
    Take this burden away from me
    You are everything I need
    Every sorrow, ever loss
    I lay them at the foot of the cross
    My heart belongs to Jesus
    He's the only one to free us
    Through anger, through rage
    Feeling locked up in a cage
    wanting to break away
    But not having the strength
    Again I cry, God please
    And then I fall to my knees
    Then I curl up into a ball
    And sing to Him before I fall
    Lord Jesus, I need you
    Give me love and strength too
    Rain your calmness over me
    Let my torn heart be at peace
    For Jesus I want to live
    There's just so much to give
    I'll follow Him with all my heart
    Nobody can tear us apart




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