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    dots Submission Name: Vision or Dreamdots
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    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.41 - 5/110/127
    Words: 71
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsVision or Dreamdots
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    Was it a dream,
    Or was it vision?

    Did i make it up,
    Or was it a gift?

    Are my eyes deceiving,
    Or are they guiding?

    It felt impossible,
    But so real.

    It was to good to be true,
    But it didn't feel like a lie.

    It tossed me towards nothing,
    But pulled me towards everything.

    Was it a dream?
    Was it a vision?




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