Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Vision or Dreamdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.42 - 5/111/127
    Words: 71
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 2373
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 453



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsVision or Dreamdots
    -------------------------------------------


    Was it a dream,
    Or was it vision?

    Did i make it up,
    Or was it a gift?

    Are my eyes deceiving,
    Or are they guiding?

    It felt impossible,
    But so real.

    It was to good to be true,
    But it didn't feel like a lie.

    It tossed me towards nothing,
    But pulled me towards everything.

    Was it a dream?
    Was it a vision?




    Submitted on 2013-12-03 20:43:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    198351

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Lilitu written by endlessgame23
    Records I written by Raphael
    Florida's Autumn Solstice written by closetpoet
    Delicious Stews written by elephantasia
    prison written by ShyOne
    The World written by jjd
    Things They (Don't) Say written by TheStillSilence
    // Seasonal Song written by ShadowParadox
    Etiquette written by saartha
    To the Artist written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Lost Inside the Race written by ForgottenGraves
    Comme un lion en avril written by Outlaw
    The Unicorn written by BlazeFlamme
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (5) written by endlessgame23
    The Old Mill written by Wolfwatching
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (2) written by endlessgame23
    The Poems Death written by Mepoduo
    Tartarus written by endlessgame23
    Love written by saartha
    winners circle written by ShyOne
    Honeymoon written by TheStillSilence
    mimicry written by expiring_touch
    Shut Up written by annie0888
    Birds of a Feather written by poetotoe
    Day 5 written by TheStillSilence
    Suffer The Children written by poetotoe
    to Be like written by KeeperOfLight
    untitled written by ShyOne
    Day 6 written by TheStillSilence
    (Untitled Song) written by TeslaKoyal

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry