Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Stop Medots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.46 - 5/116/131
    Words: 69
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 601
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 545



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsStop Medots
    -------------------------------------------


    Please..
    Tell me I'm wrong.
    Tell me this won't happen.
    Please..
    I can't do that to her.
    I can't take that away.
    Please..
    Be a non-meaning dream.
    Be a confusion in my hate.
    Please..
    Voice of mine be wrong.
    Voice of mine shut up.
    Please..
    Take away the evil.
    Take away the cause.
    Please..
    Show me it's a lie.
    Show me it won't happen.
    Please..
    Please..
    Please..
    Stop me..




    Submitted on 2013-12-03 21:28:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      Stop you from what?
    | Posted on 2014-03-07 00:00:00 | by Teofila | [ Reply to This ]
      You're wrong
    you can't
    I will
    I have
    Stop...

    Stop
    blaming yourself
    assuming the worst
    cursing your past
    spitting on hope...

    Just my thoughts on yours.
    | Posted on 2013-12-08 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]
      honestly,i liked this piece of your writing.its more realistic,liked t
    | Posted on 2013-12-04 00:00:00 | by shazzy | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    198352

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Bond written by saartha
    Primitive Lapse written by Crestfallenman
    new moon written by CrypticBard
    I will call out your name written by RisingSon
    written by Daniel Barlow
    4th Season of Vivaldi written by HisNameIsNoMore
    What happens written by Wolfwatching
    Or are we written in the sand? written by Chelebel
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Break Up written by WriteSomething
    World I No Longer Want written by ForgottenGraves
    Neither Here nor There written by layDsayD
    Trails written by Daniel Barlow
    Transparent written by Daniel Barlow
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Linger written by saartha
    Wish written by Daniel Barlow
    Red Barn written by rev.jpfadeproof
    The Promise written by annie0888
    Every..... written by jackz
    Treasure Chest written by PieceOfCake
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (7) written by endlessgame23
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Fasade written by jackz
    True Death written by layDsayD
    Whiteout written by layDsayD
    Bee Keeper written by endlessgame23
    Brigit written by endlessgame23
    Wavelength written by saartha
    It's Night Now written by RisingSon

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry