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    dots Submission Name: Stop Medots
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    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.41 - 5/110/127
    Words: 69
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsStop Medots
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    Please..
    Tell me I'm wrong.
    Tell me this won't happen.
    Please..
    I can't do that to her.
    I can't take that away.
    Please..
    Be a non-meaning dream.
    Be a confusion in my hate.
    Please..
    Voice of mine be wrong.
    Voice of mine shut up.
    Please..
    Take away the evil.
    Take away the cause.
    Please..
    Show me it's a lie.
    Show me it won't happen.
    Please..
    Please..
    Please..
    Stop me..




    Submitted on 2013-12-03 21:28:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Stop you from what?
    | Posted on 2014-03-07 00:00:00 | by Teofila | [ Reply to This ]
      You're wrong
    you can't
    I will
    I have
    Stop...

    Stop
    blaming yourself
    assuming the worst
    cursing your past
    spitting on hope...

    Just my thoughts on yours.
    | Posted on 2013-12-08 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]
      honestly,i liked this piece of your writing.its more realistic,liked t
    | Posted on 2013-12-04 00:00:00 | by shazzy | [ Reply to This ]


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