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    dots Submission Name: Signsdots
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    Author: Zai
    ASL Info:    24/m/US
    Elite Ratio:    3.97 - 66/145/98
    Words: 253
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 800
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1464



    Description:
       REALLY HOPE YOU READ THIS DESCRIPTION FIRST, for background information. This is the speech I put on an online dating site in my profile. So you know, I'm not talking about ES.

    Honestly considered making my sign read "eat my shorts" and wearing a kilt.


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsSignsdots
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    With regards to what I'm looking for in this site: I have no idea. I'm probably like most people here, just banking on fate to make the right combination of intrigue, attraction, humor, bravery, and fluttering intertwine so that one conversation can start simply and only end after 60 years of growth and drama and dreams come true. And there's soooo much that I'd want to tell that person. Everything. Even if I thought you'd be truly happier with someone else. Everything. Obviously, I can't put that on here because that's insane. My entirety will never be capable of being summed up in words on paper, though I will valiantly fail as a writer for the rest of my life to try to. You'll read tid-bits here and there on this profile, a dotted line outline of my ever present mind. And likely you will only *read* what I feel inside because I struggle with articulating strong emotions verbally. I'm working on this, this idea that I need to say the things that matter to me, that just might cause crashing waves of change instead of sucking it up (being quiet), keeping my life a slow, deep stream with only ripples to see visually. So here I am in brevity, a camouflaged light bulb; a Bird of Paradise with chameleon skin; that guy on the street corner getting paid almost nothing to twirl a sign, but instead of 'cash 4 gold', mine reads 'Keep Chin Up'.

    What would your sign read?




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    ||| Comments |||
      Okay, yeah. If you can't figure out the video thing...you should write that in it's place :D Nicely done, in my mind you totally had a british accent though xD

    <3
    Nikki
    | Posted on 2013-12-04 00:00:00 | by nikita2u | [ Reply to This ]
      Cool :)
    | Posted on 2013-12-04 00:00:00 | by Teofila | [ Reply to This ]


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