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    dots Submission Name: we not differentdots

    Author: shazzy
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 1/0/1
    Words: 85
    Class/Type: Poetry/Alone
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    dotswe not differentdots

    i close my tired eyes
    relaxing them
    But they keep burning
    of tears
    Not willing to drown
    my fears

    my emotions are cold
    while you busy shining like gold
    And how rude of you
    To doubt my age
    When friendship is not
    something given by pledge

    Why c'ant they hear me?
    it's like shouting loud
    when everyone is watching
    Swallow your pride
    give me a chance
    just let me be and
    ill make you proud

    we're all the same!

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