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    dots Submission Name: Fightdots
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    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.47 - 5/117/132
    Words: 143
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsFightdots
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    A boy,
    Lost then found,
    But was lost yet again,
    Let go into the world,
    The dark world,
    He knows little of this place,
    Or its inhabitants.
    He only know's one thing now,
    Fight.
    But this fight is for nothing,
    He can't win a fight that's already had a victor,
    He can't defeat an enemy that has already won,
    Still..
    The boy fights.
    Nobody knows why or how,
    He merely keeps fighting.
    The boy has even lost sight,
    Lost sight of the goal,
    The endpoint,
    The final outcome.
    All he knows is fight.
    It seems that that is all he has ever known.
    To fight.
    Whether it be for himself,
    Or for those close to him,
    For his pride,
    Or for their safety.
    All he knows is fight,
    And lose or lose.
    He continues to do one thing and one thing only.
    Fight.




    Submitted on 2013-12-05 14:49:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      The story of my life. I'm older now, no regrets, it doesn't all seem to have been incessant barratry.

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2013-12-05 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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