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    dots Submission Name: Steps To Live Bydots
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    Author: Magickirene
    Elite Ratio:    1.36 - 2/2/4
    Words: 170
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Description:
       I am part of a 12 Step group. This poem reflects what I have learned.


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    dotsSteps To Live Bydots
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    Defeated and lost,
    I come to Step One,
    Having paid the cost,
    My spirit weights a ton.
    On to Step Two,
    My hope begins to renew.
    With a burst of faith,
    I move to Step Three.
    Death, destruction, filth and greed,
    Left on the path behind me.
    God gives me the courage,
    To move on to Step Four.
    With God holding my hand,
    I work this step.
    Honesty, Hope and Faith
    Show me the way.
    Step Five brings to light,
    I no longer need to hide.
    Steps Six and Seven,
    Feel like no safe haven,
    Instead they teach humility.
    Love and Justice are my guides
    Through Steps Eight and Nine.
    To make right ,
    What I once made wrong.
    Step Ten is One through Nine,
    Everyday once again.
    Step Eleven,
    Keeps me talking to God.
    With Step Twelve I pray,
    To carry a message
    Without such a mess.
    To teach others,
    What God and the Fellowship
    So freely showed me.
    Finally I return to
    Step One.




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