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    dots Submission Name: I Rememberdots
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    Author: Magickirene
    Elite Ratio:    1.36 - 2/2/4
    Words: 296
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsI Rememberdots
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    As I lay waiting to go into surgery
    With tubes running into my body
    A sleepy warmth steals over my body
    My mind wanders back over my life
    I remember my dog Ernie.
    I remember watching Beauty and the Beast with my dad.
    I remember my 22 cal. bolt action rifle.
    I remember my AK-47.
    I remember Briana’s birth.
    I remember Kacy’s birth.
    I remember Jack Jack’s birth.
    I remember my dad beating me.
    I remember trying to kill myself.
    I remember my first high.
    I remember meeting my husband.
    I remember the shotgun to my head.
    I remember my uncle raping me.
    I remember my mom taking care of me when I was sick.
    I remember my little brother showing my first bra to the neighbor boy.
    I remember wanting to strangle him for that.
    I remember the heart pillow my mom made for me one Valentine’s Day.
    I remember listening to Mr. Big’s song To Be With You with my little sister Julie.
    I remember Julie’s funeral.
    I remember getting my 3 years clean medallion.
    I remember breaking two toes playing with friends in the river.
    I remember finding out I was pregnant with each of my children.
    I remember running away.
    I remember being ordained.
    I remember officiating my first hand fasting.
    I remember my first love.
    I remember my stuffed dog Henry.
    I remember dressing my brother up in girls clothes.
    I remember Briana running into a wall.
    I remember Briana and Kacy’s first day of school.
    Before I know it I wake to pain
    I recall the images that followed me under
    I smile to myself as the drugs pull me back under
    Because I know what others tend to forget
    All of these make me who I am





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      Good job but all I can say about this piece is that describes a person's simple daily activities and you were so successful to get them to paper.
    | Posted on 2013-12-06 00:00:00 | by Khaled AbdAllah | [ Reply to This ]


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