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    dots Submission Name: Eskimo Kissesdots

    Author: Passionbyapathy
    ASL Info:    23/M/Columbus, Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    5.29 - 207/277/230
    Words: 123
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 790
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       There was a time I couldn't bow my head to you, but you've beaten me with disregard and I'm caught nipping at your heels wishing you'd fall over them again for me.

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    dotsEskimo Kissesdots

    She wears chokers
    lovely little trinkets
    framing her smiling face
    glass eyed snow-globes
    encapsulating moments
    cherished mementos
    fragility and grace

    When those orbs find me
    shaken, enticed
    I embrace them tenderly
    snuggled tight am rendered
    warm with our elation

    I bury my burning
    torment in her shoulder
    find true peace
    turn smiling to
    smatter her curved neck
    with fluttering kisses
    scattered carefully
    tracing a subtle muscle
    feeling tension drop
    and knees quiver
    buckling with the weight
    of our existence

    I brush her flushed cheek
    blushing mellow
    excited but mild
    nuzzling noses
    bound hearts racing
    closely flowing
    currents pulsing
    with lover's tempest
    howling winds calm
    enveloped completely
    owing everything
    swearing everything
    for her

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