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    dots Submission Name: chasing paindots
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    Author: Beulah
    Elite Ratio:    4.78 - 588/414/44
    Words: 10
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Depressed
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       stuck in a vicious cycle against your own better knowledge...


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    dotschasing paindots
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    embracing
    darkness,
    voluntarily
    programmed
    to disregard
    every brilliant
    sunrise




    Submitted on 2013-12-07 10:36:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I wished this piece was longer
    | Posted on 2013-12-12 00:00:00 | by LAMENTATIONS | [ Reply to This ]
      As a martial artist I am sort of voluntarily programed to embrace the darkness, but this stance does not preclude the hopefulness of a new day. Just because I wish we all could defeat our personal demons soundly doesn't mean I must be a genocidal xenophobic on the guidon guile just because we all suffer from original sin. I may laude the blackness but I haven't forgotten the sacrosanct nature of the white. Here's to another sunrise!!

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2013-12-07 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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