Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: chasing paindots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: Beulah
    Elite Ratio:    4.78 - 588/414/44
    Words: 10
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Depressed
    Total Views: 528
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 122



    Description:
       stuck in a vicious cycle against your own better knowledge...


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotschasing paindots
    -------------------------------------------


    embracing
    darkness,
    voluntarily
    programmed
    to disregard
    every brilliant
    sunrise




    Submitted on 2013-12-07 10:36:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      I wished this piece was longer
    | Posted on 2013-12-12 00:00:00 | by LAMENTATIONS | [ Reply to This ]
      As a martial artist I am sort of voluntarily programed to embrace the darkness, but this stance does not preclude the hopefulness of a new day. Just because I wish we all could defeat our personal demons soundly doesn't mean I must be a genocidal xenophobic on the guidon guile just because we all suffer from original sin. I may laude the blackness but I haven't forgotten the sacrosanct nature of the white. Here's to another sunrise!!

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2013-12-07 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    198371

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Devils in the Details written by endlessgame23
    More then just goodbye written by faideddarkness
    Physician, Heal Thyself written by WriteSomething
    Ache written by rev.jpfadeproof
    winners circle written by ShyOne
    4th of July written by layDsayD
    Cover written by saartha
    Red Barn written by rev.jpfadeproof
    What happens written by Wolfwatching
    True Death written by layDsayD
    Carry written by saartha
    Waiting written by Daniel Barlow
    PEARL (Exclusive Poem) 10th Anniversary... written by Cordell
    Love written by saartha
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Etiquette written by saartha
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Dashboard Light written by layDsayD
    Whiteout written by layDsayD
    4th Season of Vivaldi written by HisNameIsNoMore
    untitled written by ShyOne
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Every..... written by jackz
    The Severed Head written by HisNameIsNoMore
    descent written by TheBadSadMan
    Or are we written in the sand? written by Chelebel
    written by Daniel Barlow
    AI written by poetotoe
    Cosmic Dreams written by Chelebel
    Push written by JanePlane

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry