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    dots Submission Name: You vs. Medots

    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.46 - 5/116/131
    Words: 151
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsYou vs. Medots

    Do you know how to show it?
    You say it but do you mean it?
    Is that all you know how to do?
    Was that the reason you feel that way now?
    Are you even trying anymore?
    Does it take to much from you?
    Are these all you know how to say?
    Do you really think it is better?
    Why do you even make one?
    Do you ever plan to keep one?
    Is all i try to give you.
    It's the only true thing i have left.
    I do it not by choice.
    You forced me to do so.
    You are the only one i care for.
    I put all of my energy into it.
    I do this to be funny.
    I try to protect you.
    These are all i have left.
    These are all i can keep.

    Submitted on 2013-12-11 14:58:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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