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    dots Submission Name: Need I Say More?dots
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    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.48 - 5/118/134
    Words: 167
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsNeed I Say More?dots
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    Why should I live?
    If happiness eludes me.
    Why should I live?
    If I can't even go home.
    Why should I live?
    If I can't have love.
    You all say I should,
    Because it'll get better.
    Because life will get easier.
    Because the pain will go away.
    I ask you this though.
    What if the pain stays?
    What if I can't live without it?
    What if I wasn't meant to be happy?
    I am a firm believer of destiny,
    You can tell me I'm idiotic.
    I'm a fool for believing this.
    Nothing will change my mind.
    Why?
    Cause everything happens for a reason.
    Just a fact of life.
    Still...
    You mock me.
    You don't believe me.
    You think things will get better.
    Why is this?
    Have you gone through the exact thing I have?
    Have you felt my pain?
    If so then what you say may be true,
    But the truth of it all is..
    You haven't.
    You couldn't.
    Why?
    You aren't me.
    Need I say more?




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