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    dots Submission Name: Waitingdots
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    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.42 - 5/111/127
    Words: 101
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsWaitingdots
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    Waiting.
    It's all i do.
    Wait to be happy.
    Wait to be loved back.
    Wait to go home.
    Thing is...
    One person does all these things.
    One person gives me everything.
    One person is my everything.
    Waiting.
    It's all i can do.
    Wait for something i can't have.
    Wait for someone that doesn't want me.
    Wait for you to change your mind.
    Waiting.
    It's the hardest part of life right now.
    Nothing i can do to change it.
    Nothing i can do to speed it up.
    Nothing i can do to stop waiting.
    Waiting.
    Waiting for what is no longer there.




    Submitted on 2013-12-12 23:38:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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