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    dots Submission Name: Leonard (a friend who passed away)dots
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    Author: TeslaKoyal
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    dotsLeonard (a friend who passed away)dots
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    Here there, everywhere
    I see feathers drift
    Being able to know you
    Was an amazing gift
    All the colorful, beautiful birds
    In a room that is their own
    How you handled them so gently
    For them, your love was shown
    Everything was always neat
    You were obsessivly clean
    I wish I was just like that
    But for me it's just a dream
    You loved your birds so very much
    And I know they loved you too
    Sometimes I look at my flock
    And start to think of you
    I feel like you are watching me
    It makes me smile and think
    Why you trusted me so much
    The birds, they were our link
    Scott will never forget you
    Believe me, nor will I
    When time to time I think of you
    I know I just may cry
    Though I didn't know you well
    You were a wonderful friend
    But I will always be sad
    About not having more time to spend
    With such a special person
    Who had so much to give
    And even though you are gone
    Forever you will live
    Next time I see a bird fly by
    I'll think of you and smile
    Knowing that seeing you again
    Will only take a while




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