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    dots Submission Name: Little Thingsdots
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    Author: TeslaKoyal
    Elite Ratio:    1.8 - 19/66/85
    Words: 126
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsLittle Thingsdots
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    When the pain becomes too much
    When nothing feels alright
    Just hold on tight to those little things
    That keep you sane tonight
    The way my hand fits in yours
    My laugh you love so much
    The way we both feel so alive
    When mine and your lips touch
    The way I rub my cheek on yours
    How my smell makes you feel
    My eyes staring into your eyes
    Our love is more than real
    It's real and true and pure
    Just how it's supposed to be
    I love you unconditionally
    And I know that's how you love me
    So when you're feeling all alone
    Just know I feel that way too
    And hold on tight to those little things
    That mean so much to you




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