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    dots Submission Name: Through Eternity With Youdots
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    Author: Teofila
    ASL Info:    17, F, with the wolves
    Elite Ratio:    0.48 - 210/102/70
    Words: 84
    Class/Type: Poetry/Friendship
    Total Views: 1090
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 583



    Description:
       For one of my best friends.


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    dotsThrough Eternity With Youdots
    -------------------------------------------


    No matter what
    You got my back
    We don't take no shit
    And that's that
    Yeah,
    You piss us off
    You'll get your ass kicked
    Yeah,
    We'll have some fun
    But that doesn't mean we're sick
    We are psychotic friends
    There for each other
    Up to the end
    When we die
    If we do
    I'll stand at the very gates of Hell
    Just to spend eternity with you
    Your my friend
    Through and through
    And I want to go
    Through eternity with you...




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    ||| Comments |||
      Haha so youre a tough girl. Good cause youll need that trait dealing with dummys for the rest of your life. Except me lol, and it was a good catchy poem. Love when poems are catchy
    | Posted on 2014-08-16 00:00:00 | by kase | [ Reply to This ]
      i got you tay :)
    | Posted on 2013-12-15 00:00:00 | by Blizzard | [ Reply to This ]


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