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    dots Submission Name: Sorrydots
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    Author: Teofila
    ASL Info:    17, F, with the wolves
    Elite Ratio:    0.48 - 210/102/70
    Words: 113
    Class/Type: Poetry/Sorry
    Total Views: 1193
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       To my friend Austin... I think you finally learned...sorry, it was just tough love.


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    dotsSorrydots
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    That stupid bitch
    You keep goin back
    Whats it gonna take
    For you to figure this out
    She aint for you
    Leave her behind
    You can do better
    Get this through your mind
    Your such a pup
    When it comes to her
    You should just leave
    Shove her heart in the dirt
    ...
    You finally listen
    And leave her behind
    Now I'm just wondering
    Whats on your mind
    Is it her or something else
    I don't know
    I cant tell
    What I know now
    Is you went crawlin
    Back to that dumb bitch
    And now you see
    I was right
    It wasn't meant to be
    Im sorry




    Submitted on 2013-12-13 20:35:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Cool I have felt like this before like what's it take
    Right!
    | Posted on 2013-12-20 00:00:00 | by DaleP | [ Reply to This ]


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