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    dots Submission Name: Shadowsdots
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    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.42 - 5/111/127
    Words: 136
    Class/Type: Poetry/The pain inside
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    I'm tired of it.
    Hiding in the shadows.
    Never being able to show my feelings.
    Show who.
    What i really am.
    Nobody cares anymore.
    Nobody.
    You can say you do.
    But do you mean it?
    Do you ever care?
    Did you ever care?
    If so...
    Then why do you leave me here.
    Left to wander the shadows alone.
    No help.
    No Guidance.
    No chance of escaping.
    So do you care?
    Did you ever care?
    For some reason...
    I have a hard time believing you now.
    You of all people out there.
    Who has stood by me.
    Held me so close.
    Now I'm just an outcast to you.
    Just someone that you stopped caring for.
    Someone that you couldn't care less if they died.
    Fine..
    I guess i get it.
    I'll stay here cowering..
    In his shadow...




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