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    dots Submission Name: Bloody Tearsdots
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    Author: TeslaKoyal
    Elite Ratio:    1.8 - 19/66/85
    Words: 102
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Another day in this lonely world
    With only more sadness to be unfurled
    No love in my life
    But one comforting knife
    Not a day goes by
    That I don't want to die
    In this sad little world
    My body is curled
    In the corner
    I'm a mourner
    Of life and death
    With one final breath
    I sigh a breath of relief
    That the knife is underneath
    My skin
    I win
    Then I start to cry
    And I ask myself why
    Did I really win?
    With the knife in my skin
    Again I start to cry
    With bloody tears in my eyes




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