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    dots Submission Name: Realitydots
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    Author: TeslaKoyal
    Elite Ratio:    1.81 - 19/65/84
    Words: 150
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Running down the hallway
    I can hear a scream
    The nightmare I've been waiting for
    Or just another little bad dream
    My heart is racing
    I can't run anymore
    Here he comes
    If I could only reach the door
    Faster and faster
    He's coming for me
    Why can't this nightmare
    Just leave me be
    BOOM! he catches me
    And he does bad things to me
    I scream "it hurts!
    Can't you fucking see"
    I struggle and I fight
    I punch and fight and kick
    Then my body
    He starts to lick
    I scream and I cry
    I scream and I yell
    Can't he see that
    This is fucking hell
    I'm not waking up
    It's not another dream
    I am so worn out
    I can no longer scream
    I beg and I cry
    I beg and I plead
    This is only one reason
    Why I cut myself to bleed




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