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    dots Submission Name: The First Cutdots

    Author: TeslaKoyal
    Elite Ratio:    1.81 - 19/66/84
    Words: 64
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsThe First Cutdots

    I see the razor
    I want it
    I fight for it
    I win
    I grab it
    My heart pounds
    There is no sound
    Not even a pin drop
    I put it to my skin
    It's cold and sharp
    But it feels so good
    Then "the warm" flows out
    I see it dripping
    Onto my bed
    I'm scared
    But soothed

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