Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Blood x 3dots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: TeslaKoyal
    Elite Ratio:    1.81 - 19/66/84
    Words: 36
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 300
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 350



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsBlood x 3dots
    -------------------------------------------


    Screaming screaming
    Calling calling
    Blood blood blood
    Reaching reaching
    Falling falling
    Blood blood blood
    Tearing tearing
    Ripping ripping
    Blood blood blood
    Burning burning
    Dripping dripping
    Blood blood blood
    Crying crying
    Dying dying
    Blood blood blood




    Submitted on 2013-12-14 00:24:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      Type A, type B, or type O
    is it possible that you'll know
    which to transfuse
    and which to refuse
    the line at the blood bank is slow...
    | Posted on 2013-12-19 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]
      These writes make me want to say "How did you get here, can I help.

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2013-12-14 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    198399

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    i've missed written by mysalvation
    written by Daniel Barlow
    4th Season of Vivaldi written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (5) written by endlessgame23
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Fasade written by jackz
    True Death written by layDsayD
    Ache written by rev.jpfadeproof
    World I No Longer Want written by ForgottenGraves
    Brigit written by endlessgame23
    the living moment written by ShyOne
    Or are we written in the sand? written by Chelebel
    prison written by ShyOne
    Every..... written by jackz
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Neither Here nor There written by layDsayD
    Etiquette written by saartha
    Blood Stains Are The Worst written by ForgottenGraves
    descent written by TheBadSadMan
    Sleep Talk written by Queen_of_spades
    winners circle written by ShyOne
    AI written by poetotoe
    Cosmic Dreams written by Chelebel
    PEARL (Exclusive Poem) 10th Anniversary... written by Cordell
    Bee Keeper written by endlessgame23
    Dashboard Light written by layDsayD
    Physician, Heal Thyself written by WriteSomething
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Push written by JanePlane
    The Severed Head written by HisNameIsNoMore

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry