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    dots Submission Name: Blood x 3dots
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    Author: TeslaKoyal
    Elite Ratio:    1.8 - 19/66/85
    Words: 36
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsBlood x 3dots
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    Screaming screaming
    Calling calling
    Blood blood blood
    Reaching reaching
    Falling falling
    Blood blood blood
    Tearing tearing
    Ripping ripping
    Blood blood blood
    Burning burning
    Dripping dripping
    Blood blood blood
    Crying crying
    Dying dying
    Blood blood blood




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    ||| Comments |||
      Type A, type B, or type O
    is it possible that you'll know
    which to transfuse
    and which to refuse
    the line at the blood bank is slow...
    | Posted on 2013-12-19 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]
      These writes make me want to say "How did you get here, can I help.

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2013-12-14 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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