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    dots Submission Name: The Live Nightmaredots

    Author: TeslaKoyal
    Elite Ratio:    1.81 - 19/66/84
    Words: 101
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsThe Live Nightmaredots

    Touching the tender flesh
    I cry
    Reaching out for love
    I curl up into a ball
    And lay in my lonely corner
    My back against the wall
    I sob tears of pain
    I can hear the rain hitting the ground
    Like my blood hitting the floor
    I carved hate into my arm
    Because that is what I feel inside
    So much painful hate
    It's making me want to die
    I close my eyes
    And I see a happiness
    And then the moment dies
    When I open my eyes
    Back to my reality
    Which feels so much
    Like a live nightmare

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