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    dots Submission Name: Painful Hatedots
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    Author: TeslaKoyal
    Elite Ratio:    1.79 - 19/67/85
    Words: 128
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsPainful Hatedots
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    Seeing only darkness
    Something's got a hold of me
    Wishing you were here
    It wont leave me be
    Wanting to let go of it
    Not able to do so
    Can't take all the pain
    I want to let it all go
    My mind is racing
    With thoughts unknown
    Looking at the pain
    How it has grown
    I'm not strong enough
    To hold it all in
    Keeping it inside
    Feels like a sin
    I'm trying to hide it all
    Burry it away
    But it all comes back
    Every single day
    It hurts so much
    This pain in my heart
    I feel like it's been
    Ripped apart
    No more love is left inside
    It's all faded away
    This hate I've come to know
    Is forever here to stay




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