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    dots Submission Name: Because I Love Youdots

    Author: TeslaKoyal
    Elite Ratio:    1.81 - 19/66/84
    Words: 99
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsBecause I Love Youdots

    Take me to a place that no one knows
    Where you and I can hide
    Take me to a place where no one knows
    Where happiness awaits our lives
    Let me rest my head upon your chest
    As I cry tears of pain
    Let me rest my head upon your chest
    As I don't have to feel insane
    Wipe all the tears from my face
    Because I can't do it myself
    Wipe all the tears from my face
    Because I need your help
    Love me always
    I know you do
    Love me always
    Because I will always love you

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