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    dots Submission Name: Darknessdots
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    Author: TeslaKoyal
    Elite Ratio:    1.81 - 19/66/84
    Words: 108
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsDarknessdots
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    I feel so deep and dark inside
    In me there is no more pride
    I sleep and wake in the dark
    My heart is cold and marked
    I feel a happiness for a while
    Then it's gone as well as the smile
    Finding peace in life is hard
    I can no longer let down guard
    I don't feel safe here again
    All I feel inside is pain
    I can't take it anymore
    I want to walk out hell's door
    I'm sick of living
    All that I'm giving
    All I get back is hate
    It's too fucking late
    I'm gone in my head
    To me I am dead




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