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    dots Submission Name: Sadnessdots
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    Author: TeslaKoyal
    Elite Ratio:    1.81 - 19/66/84
    Words: 120
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsSadnessdots
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    Don't know why
    But I just feel so sad
    It's killing me inside
    It hurts real bad
    The love of my life
    Tells me to be happy
    But for some reason
    My life just seems so crappy
    I tell myself
    It will be alright
    But then I cry
    In the middle of the night
    I wish I could be happy
    And smile too
    I'm sick of feeling
    So damn blue
    I'm scared sometimes
    Of people mostly
    I feel dead inside
    Almost ghostly
    I may not be beautiful
    I may not be smart
    But I feel pain like you
    In my heart
    One day I will be
    Out of this hell cave
    But for right now
    My hearts in the grave




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