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    dots Submission Name: Changingdots
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    Author: TeslaKoyal
    Elite Ratio:    1.8 - 19/66/85
    Words: 148
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Just laying here watching the clouds go by
    Trying so hard not to cry
    Wanting all these feelings to go away
    Waiting for all of this hate to decay
    I wish somehow I could get rid of the pain
    I'm losing control I'm going insane
    I always thought I did everything wrong
    After all this time I'm still standing strong
    Of all the stupid things I did I could have died
    But now that I have you my heart is full of pride
    I can't begin to tell you how much you mean to me
    If only you were here then maybe you could see
    All the pain and suffering I've held so long inside
    Showing me your love is somewhat making it subside
    I'm so glad we found each other I am no longer blue
    Now all the love I feel inside is all because of you




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