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    dots Submission Name: Last Dying Breathdots
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    Author: TeslaKoyal
    Elite Ratio:    1.81 - 19/66/84
    Words: 172
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsLast Dying Breathdots
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    Bloody raindrops falling down
    In them soon someone will drown
    Who will be my next victim
    Who will see a life of grim
    Reaching for the razor blades
    As the last cuts on my arm fade
    I sit down in my lonely room
    I look out the window and I see the moon
    Back in my room I'm still sitting in a chair
    I start to rip out my silky long black hair
    I look in a mirror and laugh at myself
    I scream aloud "I don't need anyone's help!"
    Still have the razor Blade in my hand
    Then I hit my head on the trash can
    Now the blood flows down red
    Thinking soon I will be dead
    Cutting and slicing and slitting my arms
    No one can save me from my own harm
    Slitting my throat I gasp for air
    Thinking to myself I have not been fair
    With my last dying breath I call for you
    But now I am dead so I can no longer see you




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      LOVE this one !!! Great word play ! no repeating ! awesome !

    meaning clear emotinal meaning ! 5/5

    keep it up
    | Posted on 2013-12-18 00:00:00 | by kyserin | [ Reply to This ]


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