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    dots Submission Name: Sometimes I Wonder Why I'm Heredots
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    Author: TeslaKoyal
    Elite Ratio:    1.81 - 19/66/84
    Words: 71
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsSometimes I Wonder Why I'm Heredots
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    Sometimes I wonder why I'm here
    Am I living just to die
    Just to feel pain and die
    I somewhat believe I have a purpose in life
    But then again I've yet to find it

    Sometimes I wonder why I'm here
    Am I living just to cry
    Just to feel hurt and cry
    I somewhat believe I am here for a reason
    But then again I've yet to find it




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