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    dots Submission Name: The World On Her Shouldersdots
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    Author: TeslaKoyal
    Elite Ratio:    1.81 - 19/66/84
    Words: 62
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 297
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    dotsThe World On Her Shouldersdots
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    And there lies the world on her shoulders
    She dies but yet the world does not
    Do they really care
    Were they really there
    Or was it all fake
    A lie a crime not fair
    No, no one would share a life with her
    And so she died
    Alone
    All alone
    And yet the world keeps turning
    Still on her shoulders




    Submitted on 2013-12-14 01:36:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      NEVER NEVER start out writing with AND lol
    Edit ** their lays the world on her shoulders *example*

    i would love to see more depth and word flow
    id give this a 3/5
    | Posted on 2013-12-18 00:00:00 | by kyserin | [ Reply to This ]


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