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    dots Submission Name: Lost Withindots
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    Author: TeslaKoyal
    Elite Ratio:    1.81 - 19/66/84
    Words: 40
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsLost Withindots
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    I'm lost within the darkness
    I'm lost within the coldness
    I'm lost within my rage
    I'm lost within my anger
    I'm lost within my sadness
    I'm lost within my madness
    I'm lost within myself
    Which I fear most of all




    Submitted on 2013-12-14 01:59:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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