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All of Myself to Kill

Author: Crestfallenman
ASL Info:    24/M/CA
Elite Ratio:    4.45 - 622 /962 /454
Words: 98
Class/Type: Poetry /Dark
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All of Myself to Kill

Research, formulate, recreate, devastate,
How long does this all truly take.

Physically drained, emotionally pained,
Deranged, contorted to a sense of ultimate...


I'm dying and no one even knows it,
To go home to cut myself deeper,
Minds fucked by lullaby pills and refer,
In a silence doth rot,
For this fucking curse this world brought!

To the mortal sins we create,
Be my darkest that I take my bow...
Loathing to full destruction, hath my spite
Arrest my spirit with death birthing night...


With all of myself to kill.

Submitted on 2013-12-14 04:26:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  self infliction , that takes me back , remember the scars remain and the pain adventualy heals, this has a lot of feeling behind it
| Posted on 2013-12-18 00:00:00 | by kyserin | [ Reply to This ]
  Makes me think of death metal. Well done in that sense. The self-harm reference seemed a bit too literal.... Cliche maybe. Just my opinion.
Nonetheless, I like it.

| Posted on 2013-12-16 00:00:00 | by Razor2TheRosary | [ Reply to This ]

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