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    dots Submission Name: Moving Ondots
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    Author: CrypticBard
    Elite Ratio:    3.54 - 368/381/226
    Words: 52
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
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    Description:
       Never allow a label to confine and delimit you. Often, the identifier that people use to describe you does not encompass the sum total of who you are. Outside today's box is your freedom.


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    dotsMoving Ondots
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    Breathe in -- aspire
    breathe out -- expire
    my aspiration knows no expiration.

    With each sunset
    there be -- sunrise awaits
    and therein lies my expiation.

    Here in a downy refuge lay,
    this germinant resolve:
    what I was I no longer am.




    Submitted on 2013-12-14 08:33:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i like the flow of these emotions ! keep it up , 5/5
    | Posted on 2013-12-18 00:00:00 | by kyserin | [ Reply to This ]
      this is a very twisting piece. what i gleam from this is the image of the emotions one goes through when dealing with tough things in life; a bad break up, a death. the picture painted here is very moving. two thumbs up :)
    | Posted on 2013-12-17 00:00:00 | by gwenn sundala | [ Reply to This ]


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