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    dots Submission Name: Anniversary Poem (by my husband)dots
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    dotsAnniversary Poem (by my husband)dots
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    I thought about a poem
    And then about a song
    And then I finally realized
    That all of that was wrong
    I thought about my love for you
    And of yours for me
    And I knew that my future goal
    Was already history
    Now don't get excited
    And don't start to worry
    Just don't get yourself upset
    Until you know the story
    I don't want you thinking
    That this is turning bad
    I wanted to get you something
    That no one's ever had
    Words have all been said before
    And sentiments are nice
    But I wanted to get you something
    That would make you think twice
    Most people might wonder
    How much that would cost
    The price has already been paid
    And everything gained, nothing lost
    The things I want to present you
    I simply cannot give
    The desire to love everyone
    And the endless will to live
    I cannot make your dreams come true
    Or the nightmares fade away
    I cannot make the rainclouds go
    Or make the sunshine stay
    I simply cannot protect you
    From the things inside your mind
    I don't know how to guide you
    From places I cannot find
    The things I want to do for you
    Have already been done
    The battles I want to fight for you
    Have already been won
    The Lord has already fought for you
    He has already won the war
    He obviously knew what I also know
    You are worth fighting for
    There are still a few secrets
    That have yet to be revealed
    One of them I will tell you
    Your wounds can ALL be healed
    Emotional and physical
    Each and every one
    The Lord God heals every wound
    Through Jesus Christ the Son
    There are a few catches
    I don't want you deceived
    The word of God only works
    When it is believed
    God will not have us suffer
    He will not have us wallow
    But in order for Him to help us
    We must agree to follow
    The final catch might be
    The most bitter of all pills
    Our great and powerful Lord
    Only does what He wills
    Before you get discouraged
    And before you get upset
    Listen close because this might be
    The best part yet
    He fought for you, He died for you
    He loves you to no end
    He's more than just our master
    He wants to be your friend
    God took two people
    And made them one
    Two separate battles
    Two battles won
    There is still a long road
    And more battles to be fought
    But I know I'm not alone
    And that really means a lot
    But better than not alone
    I share my life with you
    Every day I thank God
    For making one out of two
    Love is the bond of perfection
    Even though we are not so
    Love is our Godly roadmap
    That guides us where to go
    God put us together
    No one can tear us apart
    I hope that you know
    That you will always have my heart
    Our love is from God
    A gift for you and me
    It's nothing we can pay for
    He offered it for free
    Because it came from God
    It's reflected in His deeds
    He always watches out for us
    And He takes care of our needs
    I still have one more
    Trick under my hat
    I know you miss me all the time
    And I can help with that
    The next night that you are missing me
    Go outside and look above
    God's universe in front of you
    Is still too small to hold our love




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      me too give me more I haven't been on in awhile you renewed my interest!
    | Posted on 2013-12-20 00:00:00 | by layDsayD | [ Reply to This ]
      You know, I've read most all of your recent barrage of posts and I've come to the conclusion that you really had a tough childhood. I just wanted to say that I'm so happy for you that you have found a love to believe in that brings you comfort. I want to hear some new poems that talk about this………….yeah…………yeah!!!!!!!!!

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2013-12-15 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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