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The Saffron Glow

Author: DaleP
ASL Info:    57/M/TX
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Words: 112
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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The Saffron Glow

O Great orb steeped in gleaming saffron glow
with trailing wraiths of fairy-dreams in tow.
Are you busy kindling lovers passions?
Might you spare a minute to hear my plea?
I have lost my princess, to a dragon.
I know princesses are out of fashion

but this one is kind of special (just to me).
I know that your wise eyes see the crags on
every mountain and every ship at sea.
Surely, they noticed a flying dragon.
I hear he fled to the land down under
to a black cave where he stores his plunder.

If you would but whisper tis true
I will be eternally indebted to you.

Submitted on 2013-12-16 08:14:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I love the way this poem is presented , it speak right to the soul
very nice meaning behind yours words , i hope one day i write as well , for now i guess im still an amature lol
Comment back thanks !
| Posted on 2013-12-18 00:00:00 | by kyserin | [ Reply to This ]
  So you say the criminal element has absconded with your would be lover and you've taken to drinking moonshine and dreaming of a rescue attempt. More power too you I say.

Your such a word smith, I just love the presentation here. Repost a few more if you want!!

| Posted on 2013-12-16 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]

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