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    dots Submission Name: The Saffron Glowdots
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    Author: DaleP
    ASL Info:    57/M/TX
    Elite Ratio:    6.21 - 629/553/330
    Words: 112
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsThe Saffron Glowdots
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    O Great orb steeped in gleaming saffron glow
    with trailing wraiths of fairy-dreams in tow.
    Are you busy kindling lovers passions?
    Might you spare a minute to hear my plea?
    I have lost my princess, to a dragon.
    I know princesses are out of fashion

    but this one is kind of special (just to me).
    I know that your wise eyes see the crags on
    every mountain and every ship at sea.
    Surely, they noticed a flying dragon.
    I hear he fled to the land down under
    to a black cave where he stores his plunder.

    If you would but whisper tis true
    I will be eternally indebted to you.




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      I love the way this poem is presented , it speak right to the soul
    very nice meaning behind yours words , i hope one day i write as well , for now i guess im still an amature lol
    5/5
    Comment back thanks !
    | Posted on 2013-12-18 00:00:00 | by kyserin | [ Reply to This ]
      So you say the criminal element has absconded with your would be lover and you've taken to drinking moonshine and dreaming of a rescue attempt. More power too you I say.

    Your such a word smith, I just love the presentation here. Repost a few more if you want!!

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2013-12-16 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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