[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav

  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav

    << | >>

    dots Submission Name: The Saffron Glowdots

    Author: DaleP
    ASL Info:    57/M/TX
    Elite Ratio:    6.21 - 629/553/330
    Words: 112
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 583
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 673


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsThe Saffron Glowdots

    O Great orb steeped in gleaming saffron glow
    with trailing wraiths of fairy-dreams in tow.
    Are you busy kindling lovers passions?
    Might you spare a minute to hear my plea?
    I have lost my princess, to a dragon.
    I know princesses are out of fashion

    but this one is kind of special (just to me).
    I know that your wise eyes see the crags on
    every mountain and every ship at sea.
    Surely, they noticed a flying dragon.
    I hear he fled to the land down under
    to a black cave where he stores his plunder.

    If you would but whisper tis true
    I will be eternally indebted to you.

    Submitted on 2013-12-16 08:14:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!

    ||| Comments |||
      I love the way this poem is presented , it speak right to the soul
    very nice meaning behind yours words , i hope one day i write as well , for now i guess im still an amature lol
    Comment back thanks !
    | Posted on 2013-12-18 00:00:00 | by kyserin | [ Reply to This ]
      So you say the criminal element has absconded with your would be lover and you've taken to drinking moonshine and dreaming of a rescue attempt. More power too you I say.

    Your such a word smith, I just love the presentation here. Repost a few more if you want!!

    | Posted on 2013-12-16 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]

    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?


    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    AI written by poetotoe
    Brigit written by endlessgame23
    descent written by TheBadSadMan
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (final) written by endlessgame23
    World I No Longer Want written by ForgottenGraves
    You do, I Do written by poetotoe
    Wavelength written by saartha
    Fasade written by jackz
    4th of July written by layDsayD
    4th Season of Vivaldi written by HisNameIsNoMore
    What happens written by Wolfwatching
    Because of You written by poetotoe
    Whiteout written by layDsayD
    Your Lover written by Cordell
    Push written by JanePlane
    Alone in the Crowd written by SavedDragon
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (7) written by endlessgame23
    Devils in the Details written by endlessgame23
    Bee Keeper written by endlessgame23
    Bond written by saartha
    Sleep Talk written by Queen_of_spades
    Once Again written by krs3332003
    It's Night Now written by RisingSon
    Cosmic Dreams written by Chelebel
    Still Fighting See? written by ForgottenGraves
    True Death written by layDsayD
    Neither Here nor There written by layDsayD
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Every..... written by jackz
    Summer written by layDsayD




    User Name:


    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]

    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]

    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]