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    dots Submission Name: Glow™©dots
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    Author: kyserin
    ASL Info:    30's/Female/ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.67 - 44/25/52
    Words: 111
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 527
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    Description:
       This was inspired by my current love life


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    dotsGlow™©dots
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    Glow™© December 14, 2013


    I use to be so pale
    Just like the snow

    ice cold to the touch,
    lifeless & standing still

    till our eyes met
    then you set me on fire

    love at first glance
    i never thought it was true

    i started believing again
    when i fell in love with you

    everyday is something new
    feelings overflow ,

    love & happiness fills my heart & soul

    the color red never shames my
    face,
    this is all you ever need to know

    because you
    are the reason,

    I Glow

    ™©




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