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    dots Submission Name: Depression{Cc}dots
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    Author: kyserin
    ASL Info:    30's/Female/ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.67 - 44/25/52
    Words: 68
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 444
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    Description:
       Moved by emotional sway


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    dotsDepression{Cc}dots
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    {Depression}{Cc}

    depression try me on for size
    only emotions will flow from
    your eyes

    tears of pain tears of sorrow
    wounds will heal scars will
    Follow

    the only thing left is nothing

    a broken past a haunted tomorrow
    depression is never what it seems

    dreams are just nightmares with
    happy endings
    then no beginnings ... only ends


    {Cc}(TM)




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