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    dots Submission Name: Muse {Cc}(TM)dots
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    Author: kyserin
    ASL Info:    30's/Female/ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.67 - 44/25/52
    Words: 111
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 360
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       More of that touchy stuff <3


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    dotsMuse {Cc}(TM)dots
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    Muse {Cc}(TM)

    my dearest muse
    that sweet magical melody
    I long to hear ,

    my heart pounding
    an upbeat rhythm
    So drunk on love

    Though you calm me
    yet you send chills
    down my very spine

    you move me ,
    you make me crave you
    I long to love you

    While you twisted my world
    upside down ,then all around
    like wonderland falling down

    you make me feel alive
    you give me a reason
    too say that I'll try

    I long to
    rhyme with a magical meaning
    for these are
    true loves feelings

    (Cc)(TM)




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