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    dots Submission Name: i'm not worthy©™dots
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    Author: kyserin
    ASL Info:    30's/Female/ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.67 - 44/25/52
    Words: 135
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Depressed
    Total Views: 471
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       Past Love .


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    dotsi'm not worthy©™dots
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    i'm not worthy©™ December 14, 2013

    my heart on the line for you
    id take a knife for you

    id swim through the depths
    of hell to get back ,

    what i once use to know
    all to well

    you caused my pain
    you broke my heart

    you tell stories of our
    love fail

    it would make you cry
    over how many times
    that we've tried

    you said let it go

    i still told you no,

    you said move on let me go

    i still told you no,

    that silver lining just haunts me
    its screams to me

    while dreams are dreams
    im not worthy

    they say to me



    ©™




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