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My castle™©

Author: kyserin
ASL Info:    30's/Female/ohio
Elite Ratio:    3.64 - 44 /25 /55
Words: 123
Class/Type: Poetry /BrokenHeart
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My castle™©

My castle™©

i gave you the world
my castle came tumbling down
my draw bridge in a blaze

i haven't enough tears to
put out these flames
they keep rising ,
just like my broken heart
my castle you
left to crumble ,
lies n secrete's in a chest
found out by lover's

i wanted to trust you ,
i wanted to love you

was it vain?
I dont think,
I can ever love you again?

So we closed the past
you burnt the bridge to the ground
I cried Then rain fell down
the flames increased
my walls left defenseless,fell
our memories locked away
thats where they will stay


Submitted on 2013-12-17 16:03:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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