i wish they had a like buttons on comments lol but i could still use some more , lol this was rewritten to what is now , so revamped i guess u can say but its older , i hate that the people we fall for make us feel this way.
this piece is very touching; i believe at some point in life, we all find that one person we think makes us truly happy, and then their true colors are revealed. i have seen some of the greatest works of art come out of the hurt from these circumstances; betrayal, missing someone, etc. your piece begs the reader to think of that person in their life, and think back and wonder if they could have done things differently and how will they be different in the future. keep up writing :)