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    dots Submission Name: My deepest pain only for you , i bleed™©dots
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    Author: kyserin
    ASL Info:    30's/Female/ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.67 - 44/25/52
    Words: 78
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsMy deepest pain only for you , i bleed™©dots
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    your tools for your own demise
    i wish you knew how to break away ,

    your wrist n anckles in shackels i cant break ,
    your heart locked away

    i love you to much to let you go ,
    so ill cry

    i'll wear that fake smile on my face
    i'll pretend that its just a dream

    then maybe one day you'll break free

    ™©




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