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    dots Submission Name: Pandora™©dots
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    Author: kyserin
    ASL Info:    30's/Female/ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.67 - 44/25/52
    Words: 72
    Class/Type: Poetry/Legend
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    Description:
       im obsessed with mythology ! i love Pandora


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    dotsPandora™©dots
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    Pandora™©

    a hidden box
    you lay in wait

    to destroy those
    you don't even hate

    dare to speak your
    crimson night

    while your griffons
    take flight

    burn there city's
    with there soldiers

    werewolves howl
    at there feast

    with the red-est
    of dead meat

    swift with pain
    then comes death

    they will speak your
    dear name ,


    Pandora

    ™©




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