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    dots Submission Name: persona death™©dots
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    Author: kyserin
    ASL Info:    30's/Female/ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.67 - 44/25/52
    Words: 67
    Class/Type: Poetry/I am dead inside
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    dotspersona death™©dots
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    inked , cut , pierced
    Blood N Scars the left over reminders

    the past of pain left
    unclosed....

    one kiss of death
    while i lay numb

    blissfully thinking as
    I Die here waiting

    rings for promise
    still on my finger

    that very last breath
    as i breathe you in

    one last time
    then this is my end

    ™©




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